Chapter 431
Xuenai's Witch dress today is different from the usual one. It seems that it is new and more exquisite. On the top of the white dress, there are red trim, which is more gorgeous than the original white dress.
At this time, snow is wearing that witch's clothes, long black hair tied in the back of the head, become a horse tail, but the feeling of this horse tail is very different from senxia's short horse tail.
Under the background of horsetail and witch costume, snow is very heroic.
If it had been for the usual Sen Xia, he would have praised Xue Nai after he saw him. But after hearing xuenai say that he had finished all the manuscripts, Sen Xia's attention has been removed.
"Xuenai, have you finished the script?" After hearing the news, senxia was still a little unbelievable.
However, xuenai's answer is the same as just now: "yes, I have finished it all."
"Ah, it seems very interesting. Let's see it first." Qian Jia said quickly.
"OK, I've printed it out. Just a moment."
After xuenai finished speaking, she went upstairs, while senxia and Qianjia took off their coats and went to the living room.
As soon as they opened the quilt in the living room, the snow over there had already come with the manuscript.
"100000 words have been completed. It's really xuenai!"
After Qian Jia finished, he took the manuscript and went into the quilt.
The so-called quilt stove is actually a small table covered with quilts. There are charcoal fires or electrical appliances in the table for heating. It is a very common winter utensil in Japan. People like to sit in the quilt, eat Mandarin and watch TV.
Although the pace of the cold winter has passed now, but because of the sharp drop in temperature. Senxia and they seem to be back in winter. Qianjia looks at the manuscript and eats Mandarin at the same time.
She did it all right, but it was bitter next to the senxia, senxia this time together to Qianjia's back, with hands to support the body. I just saw the content of the text.
But at this point, senxia couldn't move her eyes.
The script assigned to xuenai is actually a very simple part, which is the daily script.
In GALGAME, "everyday" is almost the main theme of the script, not to mention 90%. At least 80% of the scripts are related to daily life. Even if it's a very hot-blooded combat Department story, sometimes you have to cram a large section of daily and college plot for you.
Senxia is no exception. Tianwangzhou, where yingmanji is located, "yes, because I wrote this script according to myself and my brother!" Snow is smiling.
"Me?" Mori suddenly realized, no wonder he felt that this plot has an inexplicable sense of seeing.
“……” Qian Jia took a look at Sen Xia, and then looked at Xue Nai, "is this really no problem?"
"Of course not." Xuenai said with both hands, "I've heard my brother say it before. Yingmanji and Zhuqi are actually brothers and sisters."
"In terms of blood, it should be sister and brother, or in terms of kinship, it should be uncle and niece." Qian Jia talks in a frank way.
"No, it's brother and sister!" Xue is inexplicably insisting that "yingmanji and Yingman's real name are brothers and sisters, and Qiqi is made by Yingman's real name, but the actual age of Fuqi is younger than that of yingmanji, so she is a younger sister!"
“……” Senxia is puzzled, why can this kind of plot still be able to quarrel, what is this ghost?
Senxia Mu gaped.
"Well, it's better to regard it as brother and sister, but in the text, it can't be written like this!" Senxia stood up.
"Well, this relationship can only be implied, I know it!" Snow is one side say, still side toward Sen Xia serious nod.
But Sen Xia can only cry and laugh.
In the 1980s and 1990s, the atmosphere of ACG in Japan was extremely open. Even in the films for children like Doraemon, there were girls who wore nothing. But at this time, ethics was not as open as that of later generations.
In the 21st century, because of the complaints of parents, the artistic and gentlemanly atmosphere of ACG has gradually disappeared, and they have to compromise with reality. On the other hand, scripts like "brother can also" and "only brother can" are becoming popular. From this point of view, the atmosphere of this era seems to be open.
But as senxia worried, this part of the plot, now implied, will definitely cause controversy.
Moreover, although xuenai is suggestive of the relationship between brother and sister, this feeling is not obvious after the script is integrated into the overall environment, especially after combining the context, this part of the content produces another feeling.
This feeling is similar to "foreshadowing", which is a foreshadowing for the disclosure of the true identity of Fuqi. It is because of this part of the plot that the content of the article becomes more reasonable when Yingman's real name appears.
"Well, in this way, it seems that it can..." Senxia nodded.
"Nah, brother, is this kind of plot OK?" Xuenai looks at Sen Xia again, her sight is full of expectation."Well, it can be used!" Senxia thumbs up at xuenai.
"Great!" Snow is happy to jump up, but then she will come to Sen Xia in front of, with a look of hope at Sen Xia, "Na Na Na, after the script, can I write together?"
"Back..."
Sleeping trough!
Senxia is stupid.
Speaking of it, he wanted to keep xuenai away from their creation. But why does he and qianjiadu praise xuenai's works so much now?
Senxia's mouth twitched.
"Well, yes, you can arrange this part, Sen Xiajun." However, Qianjia didn't know the little abacus in senxia's heart at this time.
She paused for a moment, and then went on to say, "I think that Sen Xiajun's writing of the battle and the plot of secondary two is better than snow. If you can, continue to arrange snow to play in the daily and emotional parts."
After reading re take, Qianjia has made some assessment on xuenai's condition.
As far as the fighting plot is concerned, a comparison between "Earth Defense youth" and "EVA retake" shows that Mori is more outstanding in this respect. His language is crazy, and the plot he describes is fantastic. The whole plot is not as homely as Japanese fighting.
But xuenai is very prominent in daily life, especially the warm feelings between the hero and heroine, she can show it. And although she didn't say it in front of senxia, Xue was describing the color and air in the language when she described the combat clothes, Ling Boli and Tomoka Well, it's great.
"I'll try to arrange it..."
Senxia sorted out the current situation, and he still has 600000 manuscripts in hand. The plot of this part is relatively compact and suitable for writing in one go. If you change generals on the spot, it will appear very incongruous.
And it's only 600000 yuan. If it's a little more compact, senxia is confident that it will be completed in May.
"You can also add a part of daily life to the outline, so that you won't feel top heavy, and you can also create a sense of tension and warmth before the war..." Senxia thought about it for a moment, and then made a decision, that is, to add a hundred or two million scripts to the text.
……
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At this time, snow is wearing that witch's clothes, long black hair tied in the back of the head, become a horse tail, but the feeling of this horse tail is very different from senxia's short horse tail.
Under the background of horsetail and witch costume, snow is very heroic.
If it had been for the usual Sen Xia, he would have praised Xue Nai after he saw him. But after hearing xuenai say that he had finished all the manuscripts, Sen Xia's attention has been removed.
"Xuenai, have you finished the script?" After hearing the news, senxia was still a little unbelievable.
However, xuenai's answer is the same as just now: "yes, I have finished it all."
"Ah, it seems very interesting. Let's see it first." Qian Jia said quickly.
"OK, I've printed it out. Just a moment."
After xuenai finished speaking, she went upstairs, while senxia and Qianjia took off their coats and went to the living room.
As soon as they opened the quilt in the living room, the snow over there had already come with the manuscript.
"100000 words have been completed. It's really xuenai!"
After Qian Jia finished, he took the manuscript and went into the quilt.
The so-called quilt stove is actually a small table covered with quilts. There are charcoal fires or electrical appliances in the table for heating. It is a very common winter utensil in Japan. People like to sit in the quilt, eat Mandarin and watch TV.
Although the pace of the cold winter has passed now, but because of the sharp drop in temperature. Senxia and they seem to be back in winter. Qianjia looks at the manuscript and eats Mandarin at the same time.
She did it all right, but it was bitter next to the senxia, senxia this time together to Qianjia's back, with hands to support the body. I just saw the content of the text.
But at this point, senxia couldn't move her eyes.
The script assigned to xuenai is actually a very simple part, which is the daily script.
In GALGAME, "everyday" is almost the main theme of the script, not to mention 90%. At least 80% of the scripts are related to daily life. Even if it's a very hot-blooded combat Department story, sometimes you have to cram a large section of daily and college plot for you.
Senxia is no exception. Tianwangzhou, where yingmanji is located, "yes, because I wrote this script according to myself and my brother!" Snow is smiling.
"Me?" Mori suddenly realized, no wonder he felt that this plot has an inexplicable sense of seeing.
“……” Qian Jia took a look at Sen Xia, and then looked at Xue Nai, "is this really no problem?"
"Of course not." Xuenai said with both hands, "I've heard my brother say it before. Yingmanji and Zhuqi are actually brothers and sisters."
"In terms of blood, it should be sister and brother, or in terms of kinship, it should be uncle and niece." Qian Jia talks in a frank way.
"No, it's brother and sister!" Xue is inexplicably insisting that "yingmanji and Yingman's real name are brothers and sisters, and Qiqi is made by Yingman's real name, but the actual age of Fuqi is younger than that of yingmanji, so she is a younger sister!"
“……” Senxia is puzzled, why can this kind of plot still be able to quarrel, what is this ghost?
Senxia Mu gaped.
"Well, it's better to regard it as brother and sister, but in the text, it can't be written like this!" Senxia stood up.
"Well, this relationship can only be implied, I know it!" Snow is one side say, still side toward Sen Xia serious nod.
But Sen Xia can only cry and laugh.
In the 1980s and 1990s, the atmosphere of ACG in Japan was extremely open. Even in the films for children like Doraemon, there were girls who wore nothing. But at this time, ethics was not as open as that of later generations.
In the 21st century, because of the complaints of parents, the artistic and gentlemanly atmosphere of ACG has gradually disappeared, and they have to compromise with reality. On the other hand, scripts like "brother can also" and "only brother can" are becoming popular. From this point of view, the atmosphere of this era seems to be open.
But as senxia worried, this part of the plot, now implied, will definitely cause controversy.
Moreover, although xuenai is suggestive of the relationship between brother and sister, this feeling is not obvious after the script is integrated into the overall environment, especially after combining the context, this part of the content produces another feeling.
This feeling is similar to "foreshadowing", which is a foreshadowing for the disclosure of the true identity of Fuqi. It is because of this part of the plot that the content of the article becomes more reasonable when Yingman's real name appears.
"Well, in this way, it seems that it can..." Senxia nodded.
"Nah, brother, is this kind of plot OK?" Xuenai looks at Sen Xia again, her sight is full of expectation."Well, it can be used!" Senxia thumbs up at xuenai.
"Great!" Snow is happy to jump up, but then she will come to Sen Xia in front of, with a look of hope at Sen Xia, "Na Na Na, after the script, can I write together?"
"Back..."
Sleeping trough!
Senxia is stupid.
Speaking of it, he wanted to keep xuenai away from their creation. But why does he and qianjiadu praise xuenai's works so much now?
Senxia's mouth twitched.
"Well, yes, you can arrange this part, Sen Xiajun." However, Qianjia didn't know the little abacus in senxia's heart at this time.
She paused for a moment, and then went on to say, "I think that Sen Xiajun's writing of the battle and the plot of secondary two is better than snow. If you can, continue to arrange snow to play in the daily and emotional parts."
After reading re take, Qianjia has made some assessment on xuenai's condition.
As far as the fighting plot is concerned, a comparison between "Earth Defense youth" and "EVA retake" shows that Mori is more outstanding in this respect. His language is crazy, and the plot he describes is fantastic. The whole plot is not as homely as Japanese fighting.
But xuenai is very prominent in daily life, especially the warm feelings between the hero and heroine, she can show it. And although she didn't say it in front of senxia, Xue was describing the color and air in the language when she described the combat clothes, Ling Boli and Tomoka Well, it's great.
"I'll try to arrange it..."
Senxia sorted out the current situation, and he still has 600000 manuscripts in hand. The plot of this part is relatively compact and suitable for writing in one go. If you change generals on the spot, it will appear very incongruous.
And it's only 600000 yuan. If it's a little more compact, senxia is confident that it will be completed in May.
"You can also add a part of daily life to the outline, so that you won't feel top heavy, and you can also create a sense of tension and warmth before the war..." Senxia thought about it for a moment, and then made a decision, that is, to add a hundred or two million scripts to the text.
……
Today's second watch!
Tickets, please!
There are also, today there are fine Oh, baa ha ha ha! (to be continued. )
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