I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

As Peter Parker of Earth-199999(MCU) dies shortly after being bitten by a radioactive spider,... Read more As Peter Parker of Earth-199999(MCU) dies shortly after being bitten by a radioactive spider, another soul takes his place. A teenager who committed suicide due to his tragic life gets a second......more

As Peter Parker of Earth-199999(MCU) dies shortly after being bitten by a radioactive spider,... Read more As Peter Parker of Earth-199999(MCU) dies shortly after being bitten by a radioactive spider, another soul takes his place. A teenager who committed suicide due to his tragic life gets a second chance in the body of everyone’s favorite neighborhood Spider-Man.Male Lead: Peter Parker or Spider-Man (Tom Holland)Female Lead: Michelle Jones or MJ (Zendaya)Ps- I’ve changed the timeline a little. Peter (15y/o) will get his powers in 2010. A few months before Ironman 1 takes place on his first day of high school, which is when the story starts. Also, Peter is 6 feet tall instead of Tom Holland’s 5’8.(A/N: I came back to writing recently and was fairly rusty (I didn’t write for almost a year) and lazy. I was doing short chapters and dragging things out far to long in my last story. This is my redemption story, so to speak. I’ve learned from it and hopefully this one will be better. Also, the romance will start earlier since I’m not writing about 11 year old kids going to magical schools anymore. Lol) Collapse Fanfiction, Marvel, Super Heroes, Not Harem, Magic, Futuristic Setting, No Cheats, Reincarnation, Male Protagonist, Modern Day, Alternate World, Weak to StrongI'm considering reading it, but why the hell are there suddenly titles with references to Harry Potter?After 400ish chap they get the multiverse traversal engineSo no, I stop reading something like that, I stay rereading super detective in a fictional worldanyone knows a novel where the mc has hulk powers?This?i mean similar abilities like the mc can transform into a huge monster with super strength and moretwelve step program to omnipotenceIs it good? And if it is. Where did you read it?It was good until he start making his daughter at his lab and play at being parents with MJ at the rightful age of 16. Ugh... this is not for me. bye, see ya neverwow wtfI forget to mention he also stole MJ dna without her permission to make the body for his labgrown daughter, what an amazing spiderman ????????The story is good. The plot doesnt have many if any wholes, the grammar is usually great. The only problem that i have is it doesnt really feel like spiderman himself. And it goes even further from that feeling in the Genie arc. Peter is calculative, smart and coldblooded to his enemies while warm to his close ones. The story is quite fast and it usually follows the plot of the movies. The only difference is spiderman is now forcing himself to involve himself somehow. I felt like in the beginning it was kind of forced but it was starting to feel more natural as time went by but that may have been my imagination. I kind of feel like they ruined certain characters like tony stark. He has quite a big role but a lot of snappy comments or his smart mouth personality feels like it went to Peter. But ultimately, i enjoyed it and will be coming back to read every once in a whileI feel the same way, the way he treated Logan like a dog, or how the Genie fits into the story by giving him infinite power or even the development of his daughter at a young age, doesn't seem right to me. But we have to be more open-minded towards a world with super powers, super intelligence, aliens, etc... But I loved the story, at the beginning I was loving it but over time it didn't seem like Spider-Man to me, he lost his essence .being open minded isnt an excuse, There is law in any country, propriety, manners, decency, and respect is something anyone with proper upbringing should have. There is reason, perspective, understanding, dicipline, and empathy, lending a guiding hand is the basis of healthy humanity. If not then the process of getting there is baseline of maturity. superpowers or a world of mayhem shouldnt change anything, just means the core of that person and what i just said more important or they will project it to society as hero or villain.Did he really have to make him taller?nah its just self insertWould love to know why adding 4" to Peter's height was a synopsis-worthy plot change lol.Because this is alpha peter and alpha peter has to be atleast 6ftcuz now hes a big boy now, he can stand beside tony starks without looking up.Having caught up to Chapter 293 I can say it's a pretty decent novel. The MCs doesn't act like the original Peter in that he doesn't mind killing those who have gone too far. It does a good job in keeping Peter as kind of a Sarcastic Jokester during his battles. There's honestly not much to praise since it kind of follows the Movies closely with a lot more additions like with the X-men being part of the universe and such. Though I will say it recently had an "arc" that was really great in terms of originality and just in world implications. Essentially the "arc" is Spoiler3 or so chapters in which in order to gain some OP wishes from a genie, our Peter has to go through some unknown trial that even the Genie has no clue about. Maybe it has something to do with his connection to the Web of Life and Destiny but the MC is sent on a mission to save Tobey Mcguires Uncle Ben while also teaching him the lesson he would have learned had he hunted down the killer. The next mission was one where he took control of Andrew Garfields body(he still had a backseat view and conversed with our Peter) and had to ensure Gwens safety while also defeating Electro and Green Goblin.There are, however, things that really annoy me with the story. First off, the MC just straight up goes to the Sactum Santorum and asks The Ancient One to teach him magic and she agrees(mainly because that wasn't supposed to happen in the futures she saw). He mainly did this to learn how to conceal his movements from SHIELD but this straight up makes it so that theres almost no danger in any of his fights. A second thing is the timeline. The Author decided to make it so that the first Iron Man movie is set in Peters Freshman Year at Highschool. Right now it's his Junior Year I believe(IDK cause at one point he just stops going since he's rich and smart enough that the Teachers don't bother). This makes it so that Peter has pretty much none of his own villains. Vulture probably sold all of the Alien scraps to the Avengers since Spidey said they would buy it all so theres almost no chance of him turning into a villain. Mysterio most likely won't appear since I highly doubt Tony will die with him being one of Peters best friends which also means most likely no Multiverse Shenanigans, but honestly that one might happen one way or another. MC might just jump dimensions since he might have the power with his Mystic Arts at some point. MC also hasn't revealed his Identity to any of the Avengers other than Tony and Fury(Fury accidently found out because his wife Grace knew Peter was Spiderman and said his name without thinking. BTW, this novels goes along with the theory that Fury is MJs father and Grace and May become close friends with Peter and MJs relationship so she found out Peter is Spiderman during the Attack on New York). Peter is close to being one of the most powerful people on the planet yet he still won't show who he is to protect his family. I get the idea but this guy can literally add a Passive Shield to their bodies that will activate and tell him their location whenever they are in danger so he can portal there. It's not like he's showing off to the World, just the Avengers Council would be fine.Other than those, theres not much else to complain about. This is still a pretty good fanfic for those looking for a Spidey novel.Edit: Oh also, there are R-18 scenes with MJ later on.That was long. A whole chapter of review. Haha, I always try to make short reviews but they all somehow end up like thisWait! you tried to make a short review! Though nice review.I really want to know how your normal and long reviews look like My longest one is probably for 'Shadow Slave' though a lot of that is under Spoiler, though there's not enough spoilers in it since I still tried not to give out too much. It's maybe a little over twice the size of this one I thinkyou have my respect for your patience man Do you happen to know another fic like this one?You know, defending allies or family members of your hero identity, it's not always something physical like a villain coming after you to kill or beat you, if he revealed himself, MJ's life, Grace or May wouldn't be the same, The people would be bothering them and they don't even want that fame, MJ may even want it, but she may want it as a superhero and not her teenage or citizen life.I tried to read this the way through, but it's too mary-sue for my liking. There are no stakes at all in the story so far. Oh look I'm peter parker now, wow I have superpowers, oh I want to be a super genius, guess what I'm a genius now that can hack into government infrastructure with ease. Wait that's right I want to have magic, let's talk to the Ancient One and I'll easily learn magic.Spider -man as a leader feels weird There are many comics where Spider-Man is the leader.Pretty good concept(less)