Chapter 458
Zhu Cong talked on and on for half an hour.
Ye min looks at Zhu Cong and thinks: this man is really glib. With his virtue, he is likely to be a playful man who seduces women with sweet words.
Obviously, ye min's first impression of Zhu Cong is not very good.
"Brother Zhu, please give me some specific guidance. For example, when the country uncle in the novel goes to market town to sell vegetables, what should he say when he meets those city sisters who love to take advantage of the market, so as to portray his character?"
Zhu Cong pondered for a moment and said, "you see, the uncle in the countryside has worked hard to grow some vegetables, and he has taken the burden to go to the market town for more than ten miles to sell vegetables. These vegetables are condensed with his sweat and hard work. However, the elder sisters in the city choose fat and thin, and they keep pushing down the price. One of them was walking away, And took a big radish. At this time, uncle should curse, he should curse like this: Damn, all these old women in the city are stingy
Ye min clapped his hands and said, "yes, it's time to scold him. Only in this way can we show his rudeness and directness."
Zhu Cong said with pride: "this is called using language to depict character. In fact, to depict character is not only in language, but also in the description of the character's appearance or his actions."
"Brother Zhu, I understand that we should depict the character from all aspects. Only in this way can the character be full and vivid."
"By the way, you're so smart. I think you're a novelist."
"Brother Zhu, you flatter me. I'm just a beginner. I hope you can always guide me and help me."
"Ha ha... Let's help each other and improve together. I'm just a few years older than you, and I've been engaged in writing for a few more years. In fact, I think you have a great talent for writing. "
Ye min murmured in his heart: "of course, this novel is copied from a magazine. If people don't have any talent, can the novel be published in a magazine?"
"Brother Zhu, you flatter me. I want to worship you as a teacher."
"Good."
Zhu Cong was not modest at all. He immediately agreed.
He had a little fight in his heart. The girl was very beautiful and gentle. She was much better than the poodle.
Maybe it was God who cared for himself, who was mercilessly abandoned by shimaogou, and was wronged by an inexplicable girl, so he sent such a lovely girl.
"Miss, I forgot to ask your name."
"My name is Ye min, you can call me Xiao Min later."
"Xiaomin, I'm very happy to accept you as my apprentice. I hope we can work together on the road of literature and create a new era of literature."
"Brother Zhu, today you gave me very good advice on this novel, which inspired me deeply. It can be said that listening to your words is better than reading for ten years. At noon today, I'd like to invite elder brother Zhu to dinner to show my intention as an apprentice. "
"Well, I'll treat you to dinner. Since I'm a teacher, you have to listen to me."
Zhu Cong is very happy, also very proud, he lost a domineering dog, but got a gentle Ye min, this is called: loss has gain.
At noon, Zhu Cong took Ye min to a small hotel near the cultural center.
He said: "this small restaurant is very special. Although it's all home cooked, it's very exquisite and cheap. Our colleagues from the cultural museum like to come here to get together."
The small hotel is elegantly decorated with several ancient paintings on the walls and antique tables and chairs.
When they sit down, Zhu Cong takes the recipe and pushes it to Ye min.
"Xiaomin, you can order some dishes and some of your favorite foods."
Ye min is not polite. He orders four dishes at a time. They are all expensive. It costs more than 300 yuan.
Although Zhu Cong is a little distressed, he thinks again: maybe Ye min will become his wife, so he doesn't care too much about the price.
At dinner, ye min asked, "brother Zhu, I heard that you once fell in love with Xiao Xiaohua?"
Zhu Cong shook his head and denied: "well, Xiao Xiaohua didn't come to our cultural center for a long time. In the past, we just nodded when we met. In the last half month, we started to associate, but we didn't really talk about friends."
"Brother Zhu, since you haven't talked about friends with Xiao Xiaohua, why do you kneel down in front of her and beg him to forgive you?"
"Well, Xiao Xiaohua and I went to dinner for the first time, just like we did today. As soon as we entered the hotel, we met a neurotic woman. She even slandered me and made her pregnant twice. Such a fuss made Xiao Xiaohua misunderstand me. I think that even if Xiao Hua and I are colleagues, we should clarify this misunderstanding. Otherwise, if this matter is spread, It will have a bad effect on me. "
"Brother Zhu, as you say, you and Xiao Xiaohua are just colleagues?"
"Yes, if you ask Xiao Xiaohua, we've never had a meal together. Do you think we've never had a meal together? Are we friends or girlfriends?"
"Ha ha... Brother Zhu, today we have dinner together. Are we talking about friends?"
"Hee hee... I think: we have a lot to talk about, but also have common interests, should be said to be like-minded, this is the basis of feelings. However, Xiao Xiaohua and I do not have this kind of emotional foundation. "
Zhu Cong made a serious mistake, that is, he should not speak ill of Xiao Xiaohua in front of Ye min, let alone deny that they have never talked about friends.
Strictly speaking, Zhu Cong and Xiao Xiaohua should be said to have just had a beginning and ended.
Zhu Cong's denial of this beginning is obviously a very unwise approach.
Ye min deliberately said: "brother Zhu, Xiao Xiaohua and I have known each other since childhood. We are best friends, but we are totally different in character. Xiao Xiaohua likes to be sentimental, but I am very rational."
"Yes, I have seen that you are two kinds of people for a long time. I think it's a bit strange. The old saying goes: birds of a feather flock together. Since you and Xiao Xiaohua are not the same people, why are you so intimate?"
"We have known each other since we were young. We have known each other for a long time. Although we have different personalities, we still have some common language."
"Xiaomin, I think: you are much more beautiful, smarter and more sensible than Xiao Xiaohua. In a word, I have a very good impression of you."
"Ha ha... Brother Zhu, if I asked you to give us a score, how many points would you give each of us?"
Zhu Cong thought about it and said, "I'll give Xiao Xiaohua 61 points and you 95 points."
"Ha ha... Brother Zhu, I didn't expect you to have such a bad impression on Xiao Xiaohua. I want to ask: why do you only give Xiao Xiaohua 61 points?"
Ye min looks at Zhu Cong and thinks: this man is really glib. With his virtue, he is likely to be a playful man who seduces women with sweet words.
Obviously, ye min's first impression of Zhu Cong is not very good.
"Brother Zhu, please give me some specific guidance. For example, when the country uncle in the novel goes to market town to sell vegetables, what should he say when he meets those city sisters who love to take advantage of the market, so as to portray his character?"
Zhu Cong pondered for a moment and said, "you see, the uncle in the countryside has worked hard to grow some vegetables, and he has taken the burden to go to the market town for more than ten miles to sell vegetables. These vegetables are condensed with his sweat and hard work. However, the elder sisters in the city choose fat and thin, and they keep pushing down the price. One of them was walking away, And took a big radish. At this time, uncle should curse, he should curse like this: Damn, all these old women in the city are stingy
Ye min clapped his hands and said, "yes, it's time to scold him. Only in this way can we show his rudeness and directness."
Zhu Cong said with pride: "this is called using language to depict character. In fact, to depict character is not only in language, but also in the description of the character's appearance or his actions."
"Brother Zhu, I understand that we should depict the character from all aspects. Only in this way can the character be full and vivid."
"By the way, you're so smart. I think you're a novelist."
"Brother Zhu, you flatter me. I'm just a beginner. I hope you can always guide me and help me."
"Ha ha... Let's help each other and improve together. I'm just a few years older than you, and I've been engaged in writing for a few more years. In fact, I think you have a great talent for writing. "
Ye min murmured in his heart: "of course, this novel is copied from a magazine. If people don't have any talent, can the novel be published in a magazine?"
"Brother Zhu, you flatter me. I want to worship you as a teacher."
"Good."
Zhu Cong was not modest at all. He immediately agreed.
He had a little fight in his heart. The girl was very beautiful and gentle. She was much better than the poodle.
Maybe it was God who cared for himself, who was mercilessly abandoned by shimaogou, and was wronged by an inexplicable girl, so he sent such a lovely girl.
"Miss, I forgot to ask your name."
"My name is Ye min, you can call me Xiao Min later."
"Xiaomin, I'm very happy to accept you as my apprentice. I hope we can work together on the road of literature and create a new era of literature."
"Brother Zhu, today you gave me very good advice on this novel, which inspired me deeply. It can be said that listening to your words is better than reading for ten years. At noon today, I'd like to invite elder brother Zhu to dinner to show my intention as an apprentice. "
"Well, I'll treat you to dinner. Since I'm a teacher, you have to listen to me."
Zhu Cong is very happy, also very proud, he lost a domineering dog, but got a gentle Ye min, this is called: loss has gain.
At noon, Zhu Cong took Ye min to a small hotel near the cultural center.
He said: "this small restaurant is very special. Although it's all home cooked, it's very exquisite and cheap. Our colleagues from the cultural museum like to come here to get together."
The small hotel is elegantly decorated with several ancient paintings on the walls and antique tables and chairs.
When they sit down, Zhu Cong takes the recipe and pushes it to Ye min.
"Xiaomin, you can order some dishes and some of your favorite foods."
Ye min is not polite. He orders four dishes at a time. They are all expensive. It costs more than 300 yuan.
Although Zhu Cong is a little distressed, he thinks again: maybe Ye min will become his wife, so he doesn't care too much about the price.
At dinner, ye min asked, "brother Zhu, I heard that you once fell in love with Xiao Xiaohua?"
Zhu Cong shook his head and denied: "well, Xiao Xiaohua didn't come to our cultural center for a long time. In the past, we just nodded when we met. In the last half month, we started to associate, but we didn't really talk about friends."
"Brother Zhu, since you haven't talked about friends with Xiao Xiaohua, why do you kneel down in front of her and beg him to forgive you?"
"Well, Xiao Xiaohua and I went to dinner for the first time, just like we did today. As soon as we entered the hotel, we met a neurotic woman. She even slandered me and made her pregnant twice. Such a fuss made Xiao Xiaohua misunderstand me. I think that even if Xiao Hua and I are colleagues, we should clarify this misunderstanding. Otherwise, if this matter is spread, It will have a bad effect on me. "
"Brother Zhu, as you say, you and Xiao Xiaohua are just colleagues?"
"Yes, if you ask Xiao Xiaohua, we've never had a meal together. Do you think we've never had a meal together? Are we friends or girlfriends?"
"Ha ha... Brother Zhu, today we have dinner together. Are we talking about friends?"
"Hee hee... I think: we have a lot to talk about, but also have common interests, should be said to be like-minded, this is the basis of feelings. However, Xiao Xiaohua and I do not have this kind of emotional foundation. "
Zhu Cong made a serious mistake, that is, he should not speak ill of Xiao Xiaohua in front of Ye min, let alone deny that they have never talked about friends.
Strictly speaking, Zhu Cong and Xiao Xiaohua should be said to have just had a beginning and ended.
Zhu Cong's denial of this beginning is obviously a very unwise approach.
Ye min deliberately said: "brother Zhu, Xiao Xiaohua and I have known each other since childhood. We are best friends, but we are totally different in character. Xiao Xiaohua likes to be sentimental, but I am very rational."
"Yes, I have seen that you are two kinds of people for a long time. I think it's a bit strange. The old saying goes: birds of a feather flock together. Since you and Xiao Xiaohua are not the same people, why are you so intimate?"
"We have known each other since we were young. We have known each other for a long time. Although we have different personalities, we still have some common language."
"Xiaomin, I think: you are much more beautiful, smarter and more sensible than Xiao Xiaohua. In a word, I have a very good impression of you."
"Ha ha... Brother Zhu, if I asked you to give us a score, how many points would you give each of us?"
Zhu Cong thought about it and said, "I'll give Xiao Xiaohua 61 points and you 95 points."
"Ha ha... Brother Zhu, I didn't expect you to have such a bad impression on Xiao Xiaohua. I want to ask: why do you only give Xiao Xiaohua 61 points?"
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